Wow, you are really putting a lot of effort to this fan fiction. I quickly checked out the first chapter and it seems very nicely written.
The potential for amazing stories in this game is the reason I am here. I look forward to what comes next. You might recognize some of the "echos" in this - they are from ICQ, and are intentional. Indeed, some people were rolling dice the other day to see what happened ... :)
"Echos" are intentionally NOT anyone's current character; after all this is set long ago. They can however be a lot of fun, although be warned, this is a dark tale not a goody two shoes fairy story!
http://lysetteldc.wix.com/elyria-dark-tales
Please put any feedback below.
It's over 76,800 words currently. And ... I have an editor! Wohooo the number of horrid errors will fall sharply over time :)
Echos abound :)
To be continued...
Wow, you are really putting a lot of effort to this fan fiction. I quickly checked out the first chapter and it seems very nicely written.
There's a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but it's solid overall. Well done.
I love it.. and the concept of an 'Evil' Queendom is intriguing ;)
After a bitter sweet delay (new job! ... damn new job no time!) ... Chapter 9 is finally up :)
Chapters 10 and 11 are up. They were originally one rather long chapter ... but the hosting site format despised me for it, so I split them to two.
Typos, formatting errors, the odd grammar "eh?!" are all to be expected ... it will get a proper edit once the story is actually on the page. And they will indeed get off this ship eventually, promise!
Posted By xxcooljokexx at 7:12 PM - Mon Jun 12 2017
In Tenebris Nos..
This isn't a BH story?
I said it before, I'll say it again. It's a great story and I hope to see more!
Posted By Tarvald at 10:54 AM - Tue Jun 13 2017
I said it before, I'll say it again. It's a great story and I hope to see more!
Thank you! Chapter 12 is now up, and given Vye is in it, I suspect really bad things might be in my character's future if I don't write more! No pressure eh?
In truth, it's a delight to write, especially with input from the community. And yes, dark twists are inevitable ... because of the old maxim "just add players".
Very well done M'Lady. (Deep bow)
Greetings fellow Elyrians!
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Chapter 14! It really is the continuation of the previous one ...
And yes, feedback welcome! Alas, I agree duct tape does not really have a place in Elyria ... so it became that Ketoth used copious amounts of tape ... He had strips of cloth worked with a sticky tree sap on one side, and bees wax on the other, rolled into a tape.
Thanks for the amazing suggestions of how to make Duct Tape in the middle ages Medussa!
I only read the first chapter, this is very interesting. Will continue on this (Hi from Ninja)
you are more then welcome
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