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The Black Queen - Novel in Progress
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Black Queen

The potential for amazing stories in this game is the reason I am here. I look forward to what comes next. You might recognize some of the "echos" in this - they are from ICQ, and are intentional. Indeed, some people were rolling dice the other day to see what happened ... :)

"Echos" are intentionally NOT anyone's current character; after all this is set long ago. They can however be a lot of fun, although be warned, this is a dark tale not a goody two shoes fairy story!


http://lysetteldc.wix.com/elyria-dark-tales

Chapter 1 No sleep tonight

Chapter 2 In the fire's glow

Chapter 3 Foul winds

Chapter 4 Before the dawn

Chapter 5 The scientist

Chapter 6 Priestess

Chapter 7 The Baron

Chapter 8 The River of Dreams

Chapter 9 Voices

Chapter 10 Flotsam

Chapter 11 Fishing

Chapter 12 Guests

Chapter 13 The Council

Chapter 14 Needs Must

Chapter 15 The Dance

Chapter 16 Into Darkness

Chapter 17 Red

Chapter 18 Blue

Chapter 19 White

Chapter 20 The way down

Chapter 21 Strangers in a stranger land

Chapter 22 Knight's gambit

Chapter 23 Under the mountain

Chapter 24 Dark river

Chapter 25 Uninvited guests

Chapter 26 Blossom

Chapter 27 Pawn to black

Chapter 28 On the cliff

Chapter 29 The Dance

Chapter 30 Supper

Chapter 31 An absence of light

Chapter 32 Masks and stars

Chapter 33 When angels cry

Tols Ship

Please put any feedback below.

It's over 76,800 words currently. And ... I have an editor! Wohooo the number of horrid errors will fall sharply over time :)

Echos abound :) Guests

Consequences


To be continued...


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11/8/2016 8:52:54 AM #1
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Wow, you are really putting a lot of effort to this fan fiction. I quickly checked out the first chapter and it seems very nicely written.


11/9/2016 7:05:08 AM #2
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Thank you! :)


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11/14/2016 11:24:45 AM #3
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There's a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but it's solid overall. Well done.


11/21/2016 11:34:22 PM #4
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I love it.. and the concept of an 'Evil' Queendom is intriguing ;)


5/18/2017 1:50:31 PM #5
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After a bitter sweet delay (new job! ... damn new job no time!) ... Chapter 9 is finally up :)


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6/7/2017 2:38:25 AM #6
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Chapters 10 and 11 are up. They were originally one rather long chapter ... but the hosting site format despised me for it, so I split them to two.

Typos, formatting errors, the odd grammar "eh?!" are all to be expected ... it will get a proper edit once the story is actually on the page. And they will indeed get off this ship eventually, promise!


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6/12/2017 6:12:27 PM #7
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In Tenebris Nos..


6/12/2017 7:20:20 PM #8
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Posted By xxcooljokexx at 7:12 PM - Mon Jun 12 2017

In Tenebris Nos..

This isn't a BH story?


6/12/2017 10:54:00 PM #9
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I said it before, I'll say it again. It's a great story and I hope to see more!


7/14/2017 8:53:01 PM #10
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Posted By Tarvald at 10:54 AM - Tue Jun 13 2017

I said it before, I'll say it again. It's a great story and I hope to see more!

Thank you! Chapter 12 is now up, and given Vye is in it, I suspect really bad things might be in my character's future if I don't write more! No pressure eh?

In truth, it's a delight to write, especially with input from the community. And yes, dark twists are inevitable ... because of the old maxim "just add players".


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9/4/2017 7:51:59 AM #11
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Chapter 13 is up :) Artwork to follow.


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9/5/2017 2:43:46 AM #12
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Very well done M'Lady. (Deep bow)


Greetings fellow Elyrians!

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9/6/2017 8:35:50 AM #13
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Chapter 14! It really is the continuation of the previous one ...

And yes, feedback welcome! Alas, I agree duct tape does not really have a place in Elyria ... so it became that Ketoth used copious amounts of tape ... He had strips of cloth worked with a sticky tree sap on one side, and bees wax on the other, rolled into a tape.

Thanks for the amazing suggestions of how to make Duct Tape in the middle ages Medussa!


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11/20/2017 8:21:22 AM #14
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I only read the first chapter, this is very interesting. Will continue on this (Hi from Ninja)


11/20/2017 12:24:44 PM #15
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you are more then welcome


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