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That's a great and original concept you got there :D Are you guys looking to settle on the central or west server?
It's will be decided once there are more members to have a proper vote/discussion on the matter. so to be decided.
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Just edited a lot of stuff on the main post.
Posted By TheEvilBassist at 4:44 PM - Mon Nov 21 2016
That's a great and original concept you got there :D Are you guys looking to settle on the central or west server?
Seeing there might be only one EU server if the population in EU isn't sufficiently high enough, I don't believe that should be a deciding factor, especially since the ping difference is about 10-15ms (Unless you are living in Dublin or Frankfurt of course).
Just edited quite a bit, I feel that it's much closer to what I plan. many things may be changed in the future.
probably lots of typos and wording to fix aswell.
btw if anyone will be wondering Trizikha Vajra means "Three Pointed Vajra" in sanskrit theres a lot of philosophical meaning to it, vajra also means thunderbold and diamond which symbolize indestructibility and irresistible force, google three pointed vajra to read more about the philosophical and religous meaning, it's very intresting in my opinion and may be used for some roleplaying in the future.
also i'm very interested in hearing peoples opinion of it so far.
Honest opinion as requested:
-Look professional: Unless this is going to be a non-English based association, definitely go back and continue to fix grammar, spelling mistakes, etc. The more of these that pop up, the less seriously you will be taken in general.
-Define yourself: I can't tell what sets this apart from other associations. Intro talks about being in the shadows and being feared, but also has connotations of supportive family-like structure. Its vague and needs refining. "Assassin" guilds are a dime a dozen -- how are you different?
-Simplify the rank structure: You don't need that many ranks just because they sound cool. Excess bureaucracy and titles bloat organizations unnecessarily unless you become massive. Until you find an actual need for more, stick to ~4 tiers with yourself at the top, trusted officers next, full-fledged members and trial/recruit status at the bottom.
Thanks for your opinion it really does help. i'm actually still looking in many direction about the specific so maybe that's also why it's so vague. and the grammar will of course have to be fixed. writing in english isn't my strong suit.
Edited and fixed some of the grammar, will change most of it tommorow when i'm home.
the ranks that I removed we're more for roleplay purposes so the only one I kept is Grand Elder which will also be for roleplay mostly but I have some ideas towards it so i'll keep it for now.
Looks good so far. You fail to mention where you will be starting.
What is your guild's aim? Are you just to be the best assassins around? I have a deviant guild of my own. I would like to help you plan some things out in order to be successful over a long duration after the game comes out.
Well it's more of a martial art philosophical sect that stays in the darker part of society than just an assassins guild, also focusing on alchemy and such if that makes sense. so you don't have to be an assassin if you join since it will be mainly acting as a sect.
I'm reworking the entire thing in the last few days and will update soon. just talking to some people outside of the forum that may be interested in joining.
just over to my teamspeak if you want to talk or give me your discord if you have one. it's thetreehouse.teamspeak.social.
and where I will be starting is still undecided as of this moment.