Please put your poetry through Grammarly! I've seen a lot of small mistakes that really took away from the impact of some of the better pieces I've read so far on these forums. I love and appreciate the work that goes into them, so I'd like to see them be the best they can be!
If you need a second edit through or feel like something isn't right, I've yet to get anything less than an "A" in any class that has to do with English and would be MORE than happy to help. For reference, I am in college, so... that's at least two English classes.
Have a great night! Keep writing!
Daardain, First Siren of Lady Nelanie Luna'de Sàng; First Minister, Minister of Health, Agriculture and Sciences of the County of Cambria.