Extremely well done! Great pacing. Enjoyed every part of it.
Thank you very much!
Very well done. Believable background, characters, setting and the so well done story. I hope you will grace us with more writing in the future.
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Your story was extremely enjoyable and I hope that you decide to actually continue this storyline in the future!
Really great writing! I'm for sure impressed. This contest is not easy!
Great tale! Thoroughly enjoyed it. Congratulations on placing in the contest, you earned it!
This is very well written